Ends: From the brother of Wrong Virtu
The life
the love
your ways
your God
it all makes us sick
it all FUCKING crumbels in the end
what will you do
you will cry
you will scream
when all you know is daed
when everything is gone
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well.....
this is very straight forward stuff and slightly on the depressing side, however if thats how you feel then its a good expression of your thoughts,although I will say that, you may think everything crumbles in the end but believe me,if that was the case Id be so happy,whereas I believe that nothing goes unanswered.
life will continue,and for those who rejected faith they will wish that everything did just crumble......excuse my long message that may insult you,but it really shouldnt ,Im just replying about something I feel very strongly about....thanks for sharing your poem of thought and keepem coming!....good write ;)
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this is comming from the brother of the brother of Wrong Virtu.
I am Wrong Virtu.
Your God is dead. And no one cares.
I was once devoted to the Christian Faith. I will not deny that there is no God, for I know that there is in fact a God. I just do not believe in her. I do not accept her. I give reply only because this poem comes from my brother, whom I dearly love and respect, and everything that leaps off his tounge--I find to be a reflection of myself and my own beliefs--are my own thoughts, transcribe through another being.
Your God has let me down in more ways than I can express. I have given up all hope in her divine power and will gladly welcome an eternaty in the pits of Hell than bow to my knees to a War Loving Piece of non fiction filth of an animal instinctive, Mel Gibson wannabe. On and on with my ramblings. I bow to his creative genious.
If there is a Hell, I'll meet you there.
ok.......
well, you have obviously been down a rough road wrong vitue,and I agree that life is not always fair nor pleasant,but as a muslim myself,first of all I do not refer to our God as 'her'...secondly, regarding the point you made about God letting you down, well,you can think of that as a bad thing or you can learn from the hardships you have experienced,and make a better person of yourself.
please know that muslim or non muslim......Islam teaches that God tests who he loves,that probably sounds a bit lame but, us lot who have gone through hell on earth,will with guidance have an eternity of peace......by the way,Islam means submission and peace.....its not war loving nor did our prophet revert nations through war,but through kindness and behaviour.....really,thanks for reading and I can understand why you were lead this way of hate for faith,its happening alot lately,but its merely an excuse not to follow laws and rules....I hope you find what ur looking for soon...take care.
p.s: please dont take my message as a form of preaching,that was not my intention.....take it as educational information to help with you future poems ;)
Finally, this is what I want to hear.
That was not preaching, at least not to me anyway. I will keep this short, for I have a big bag of mushrooms that "She" has given to this world through the droppings of a cow. Sick...I know...but, I must partake. anywho...I dont want this to sound as though i am a Hypocrite, but my stand on God is this...I Do not believe in her, but I am aware of her existance. I have feelings of hatered for myself becuase I desperately want to "believe"...believe in her fully and without doubt...but for some reason unknown to myself at this time, I have no desire to submit and ask for forgiveness.
and my P.S. I say her becuse I hope that in denying God as the Father it will help me in my hope to set myself loose from all my confussion and give up all hope in accepting her love
another P.S. I say her, because, in my head, women are the most beautiful things in this world and I imagine that to be the case in the next.
For all it's worth...