Lady Eden, Watch It Bleed

Screaming into words
Bleeding out emotion
There is no sound
There is an absence of your empathy
Clawing into my skin
Scratching at my eyes
The only thing I want to feel

Gone with the emotional
Give me the physical
Give me all the pain

Face to face with the End
Push It away
Continue to Fail
It’s what I do best

I’m that little fucking bitch you hate
And I’m in love with it completely

I dance around
A noose around my neck
Shotgun in my hand
Only to sit back in my chair
And drink away this world

Death is way too fucking easy
So I sit and drink and play with matches

Fighting those in greater size
Give me all you’ve got

Broken nose and coughing blood
I just want it all to hurt

Give me the physical
I’ll kill the emotions with a needle and a drink

Kick me and I’ll laugh
Cut me and I’ll ask for more

!MORE!

!!MORE!!

!!!MORE!!!

I carved Your name into my chest
Eden drips in blood

It didn’t hurt a bit
So I carved it once more

The way I see it
Or the way it is

All the pain I cause myself
Hurts those that pretend to fucking care

It’s liberating to know
I’m stronger than Your God
In my own mind

Interesting Read

Charged with hate and high emotion, I think this piece is 'attention grabbing', I think there is as much written between the lines as written in the lines themselves. A piece that is open to indivdual interpretation, makes it, in my mind, an interesting read,
Dave

you asked us to keep our comments to ourselves?.....

well, sorry mate, its a free world apparently!
ok, so , I thought ur poem was really emotional and strong....
full of feelings ppl usually hate to have.
but if ur happy like that and feel as though u are stronger than God(in ur own mind) then it was quite interesting to read the thoughts of a lost soul desperate for advise but waaaaaaaay to proud to embrace it.....brighten up mr virtue,
for the life u hate so much is very short indeed and there is no going back when death knocks on you soul.....excellent write tho.....peace.

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