A Million Roads to Certainty
I don't know what to do
I don't know what is right
This love I feel for you
is to strong to be forgot
I hope in time you'll feel
The way I feel for you
Like acid burning deep
enough to kill my hurt
But I'm to fucked up to feel
and I can't hurt you anymore
I need to leave you now
I need you to forget
And most of all I need from you
To promise from your heart
To always know and understand
My death is not your fault
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so sweet.....
this is really great!,however, you have a tendancy to always write ''to'' instead of ''too''.......not the end of the world or anything,but since you asked me to be critical of your writes...well,thats all I can correct....it was very sad and sweet at the same time......damn ,I hate confusion!! thanks for sharing with us.....peace.
and peace to you
confusion is what creates Love. Confusion is what makes us who we are. thank you for your comment miss 86. I look forward to your next song of life. Never cease writing.
For all it's worth...
appreciated brother!....
you are very right here......confusion is deffo what creates love however im not sure that is makes us who we are though...I have many a time felt confused in life....love etc.....but there was always the greatest feeling of reassurance in my heart bout one thing for sure....i think u know what im talking about.........peace.
not entirely sure i get this...
you seem to like the subject of death, which i always avoid. i like that you use everyday language. one mechanics critique- watch when using "to" and "too".
loni balogna