Psalm 151
Where the is Darkness
there is Peace
Where there is Peace
there is Hope
Where there is Hope
there is is a choice
Where there is a choice
there is Confussion
Where there is Confussion
there is Despair
Where there is Despair
there is Death
Where there is Death
there is Darkness
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excellent...
this was very clever and well written....its very true and quite interesting to ponder on...good write wrong virtue :)
I must admit, I can't repent
thank you mr repenter. though i ask that next time you comment on one of my writes to please be a little more critical. I like good feed back just as much as anyone else, though i know that everyone is thinking only about its flaws and I would like to know what they are and how I could go about "perfecting" the piece. thanks again.
For all it's worth...
correction.....
well wrong virtue,first of all u can call me miss as I am as u put it one of lifes beauties...ie...a woman,secondly,Im not bluffing when I say that this was truly in my veiw a very good write...if there was something you wrote that I didnt like,believe me you'd hear from me [u should know by now,hehehe.]
also...I will criticise u on one thing for sure.....stop being so negative all the time.....when ur good at something,ie...poetry,be proud and take compliments as a positive view of yourself.....its ok to be liked and its ok to like back ;)keepem coming,good job!
actually......
now that I had a second look....I did notice some spelling errors....
In the first line of the write....you meant to say ''there''but you wrote ''the'' and also confusion has only one ''S''.
okay and just great
I doubt I will ever consider myself to be good at poetry for the simple fact that I do not write poems. I write what is speaking away inside my mind and simply enough the world calls it poetry. I call it boredom. changes will be made as they need be though in the future it's okay to just say 'what the hell are you writing about. For most do.
For all it's worth...
wait your a female... well thank you for not being one of us pathetic war loving rapist known as man I respect you a little bit more at this moment
heheheheehe....ur a character are'nt ya!...
thanks 4 respecting me a little more as Im a lill lady and what u said bout poetry and your idea of it.....well,i must say that I agree....poetry is infact just what you feel inside and want to say to the word in your moment of boredom....im a busy gal and dont have much time to write poetry as a hobby....i tend to write it when im completely bored out of my brains...hehe.
any ways.....I think alot, and I found myself thinking bout you last night [not in that way!] but I just kept wondering about you....there is something I feel needs closure....I hope you find it soon cuz its miserable to go on living with such hurt inside.....you probably think u are the only one who can see sence in this damn world.....but you are human and have a natural want weather u like it or not......please take some advise ......open ur eyes....and READ!.....I hope you know what I mean.....do take care wrong virtue....peace.