The Beautiful: Attempt Number Six
This one leaves no offense
To anyone, especially,
The broken ones,
I take no pity anymore
Give or take the pass
Around like
Little pawns
I gave to her a
Rosetta Stone
A lost and bleeding gem
So cancerous
Were my words
poured from ink
Next to a rose
With golden thorns
No, that’s not a metaphor
And there is no raven
Above my door
Give respect and
Smoke some more
I hope that thing
Is broken now
Just let the damn thing fall
I love the sound of
The shatter
When glass breaks
See this smile, take
A picture
I love how it remains
This is just a thank you write
A way to say I hate
The nights when
Only the music breaks
The night and all
The silence
Left with you
Inside you
All alone within your head
I kind of got off
Subject
By a sparkle of the Kindness
Now, that one is a metaphor
Here’s a rhyme, it’s kinda pure
Now, that one wasn’t forced
Words are so much fun, but
Paper is a blast
That one is a pun, I guess,
And of subject does not
Come close
I can’t see the road
I started this
To bitch about
The past and a stupid
Cheap glass rose
I threw in a few
Rhymes, though none to go
Here
I should insert the phrase Golden Song
And call this one a Beautiful
For a strange feeling…ehh?
Is the only reason why
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wow
dont know really know why
but your poem is different than other ones i read
and i love it! :)
your "so called not meaphors" were awesome especially words were cancerous and "my words poured from ink"
T K $
Thank you miss ks. It's how I like to write. thanks for that.
For all it's worth...
Your good at this.....
Jesse....you have a way of writing which forces me to hold my chin in figuring out the story behind each of your writes, I know for sure that you never write a meaningless piece or write a piece for fun or pleasure, it's almost like you need to release your pain on paper and even though others may never fully get what your writing, I don't think you care, You don't write for people, you write for yourself, and it reflects in your work, which I find nearly charming and unique, don't change that technique as it's an different twist on online poetry.....I liked this very interesting write my friend.....peace.