The Beautiful: Attempt Number Three
Is it better there
In that Other World
On the Other Side
Are you happy there
Can you hear our Golden Song
Am I playing it on key
Am I playing it in tune
Without you it feels so strange
Can you hear me where you are
Is my voice just a whisper
Reaching out with everything
Pulling back an empty heart
Was there nothing I could do
I did all that I knew how
Can you give me an answer
Or do my pleas just fade out
Now I’m trapped in this confusion
Was this really the best way out
Note said you had nothing else to live for
When I was just a pillow case away
My tears
Can only whisper
What it strains my voice to say
I will
Always and Forever
Love you
Just the same
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Jesse,
That must have been a very difficult piece to write because it was not easy to get through it. The emotion was so real and palpable. If this is based in reality you are carrying quite a load.
Pete
A child's crusade...
"No art is possible without a dance with death."
She is my Lady Eden. My friend, Pete. Always and forever til the very end of everything. and that will never change.
mea cupla...yes, that would best describe this...
I could have been more understanding....more caring...more anything....
But I simply watched her fade away. And did nothing.....
A pillow case seems to equal a million miles.... and nothing less
For all it's worth...
oh my god...
i teared up reading this. you made the emotion incredibly strong, like the reader is going through it with you. you're amazing because you can turn tradgedy into art. you're incredible! keep up the good work.
For all it's worth...
thank you, my friend
this was actually one of the easiest poems i have ever done
i did not ponder did not question did not refuse what my heart told me.
I only acted as a tool as my heart poured out with ink
and i am glad you took the time to read it.
I thank you...
as would My Eden...
she that is Beautiful
For all it's worth...