holidays
merry christmas,
lots of presents.
day of thanksgiving,
try to eat all your stuffing.
onto the next year, that's new year,
some people are scared, they have a big fear.
happy birthday,
having fun all day.
the luck of the irish, st. patricks,
this is a time for rainbow tricks.
halloween time,
it's a scary time.
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some constructive criticism
i just couldn't get into this poem, the rhythm and rhyme are just all over the place. i couldn't quite get what you were trying to say, which is unfortunate as it could be an interesting poem.