rush

just go! punch!
take another shot!
got'em!
rush.
it's not violence,
it's just a fight! he's in a bad spot.
rush.
just... another... fight... hit...
rush.
boom! elbow him in the stomach.
rush.
kick his leg out from under him,
kick his face as he falls, ouch!
rush.
stop and enjoy the adrenaline
flowing through your arms,
that feeling down your spine,
that ecstatic feeling. you...
help him up.
"good one," he says. "see you tomorrow."
rush. can't wait.

this is the first of your

this is the first of your poems that i actually enjoyed - thanks, keep it up!

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