The Forgotten

What ever was left behind, now lies in silent wait

Anticipating the moment the master drops the bait

It hides a cold, evil smile

I guess the wait was worth while

Soon the bait is passed on

To the pitiful screams of the memories long gone

But now their time to kill has come

Their journey filled with bloodshed has only just begun.

nice

I like this poem very much...:X:X
You are the first who`m i give a comment to...because i`m new to this site...
About the poem...I think the that you will continue it...am i wrong???

Hey, Thanks For the Comment

Hey, thanks for the comment! I like knowing at least someone bothered to type up something:D. Umm...I will continue it if you give me an idea how. It was just a poem I used in one of my stories on FanFiction.net, and I thought...since it's a poem I'd post it. If you have any ideas, you can continue it, or if you want, tell me, and I'll see what i can do!!

Again, a bunch of thanx

From:
XxUnforgivenxX
An Alien From Mars

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