Sing
By special request for Joyce
I can write about sang
I can write about song
I can make it short
Or I can make it long
I can write at home
I can write on the go
I can even write about
Things I don’t know
I can write with a pen
I can write with a pencil
If it makes you happy
I will use a big stencil
Whatever you desire
It does'nt really matter
If you get hungry
I‘ll write “The Pu Pu Platter”
It’s ladies choice
I can do anything
But please don’t ask me
To write about "Sing"
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SING!!!!
Yobarney,
Not even a D Jay could write a song about Vee Jay...
great write again. very cute.
Linda
Dr. Suess
Dr. Suess would be proud of me... I started to make up some stupid names for planets that i could write about... I did not want to put too much energy into this one ...but I could!
Thanks Linda!
good job, yobarney
very good poem! as usual your humor is great!
joyce
hi
hi
i read the comment u posted on 'waterpologrl's poetry blog about her poem "Shadow"...i'm pretty sure that's what it was.
but i noticed that you were saying something about how her poem didn't flow in one part because of the 6 syllables and 7 syllables or something like that. and all i wanted to say, with all due respect, is that poetry isn't about using a specific amount of words or making sure every word at the end of the sentence rhymes...it's about what the person is trying to say.
i really hope im not offending you...one thing i hate about posting comments is that people can't hear the tone i'm speaking in...ha. ya, well bye.
~brianna~
Flowing
Dear Brianna... You are right! poetry does not have to flow or rhyme and I have written some prose myself... I made the comment ..."Is this meant to flow or is it more of a prose style? ... If it is supposed to flow then count your syllables" ...to Waterpolo because I sensed that she was trying to make it flow and when I sent my thoughts on it I did use the phrase "IF... it is..." Like you said it is hard to stick your neck out and give an honest opinion for fear of a tone or attitude... I did not realize that Waterpolo was brand new to this site as we are and if I knew that I probably would have held back a lot to not scare her off... I want you to know that i have made comments of nothing but high praise and admiration to writers of poems that do not flow or rhyme... I just had a sense that Waterpolo was trying to make it rhyme and flow better.
I do love the fact that we live in a country where we are allowed to be ourselves and express our selves as we please... Thank you for not being rude to me for expressing mine!
Also I would love to hear any advice that you may offer to me about my poems!
Thanks,
Ray AKA yobarney